English Need some Criticism for a gaming video

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Jawohl
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I cant remember if there were any rules against doing this; so just saying now if there are; my bad

i just released a new video on my gaming channel called Top Hat Towers for a blind playthrough of Majora's Mask;
i was just hoping i could get some criticism from the lovely trolly people from here on Unreal Software;

we dont get many viewers; so i was just hoping some people would let me know how were doing things; any help is appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tCB3ghiJRq8
30.06.16 08:55:27 pm
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Video seems nice. Giving you like for the start.
30.06.16 08:57:43 pm
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Jawohl
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thankyou; iv got about a 100 other videos that virtually no one watches

so if you had the time or patience to look through them; greatly appreciated.
30.06.16 11:05:04 pm
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SmD
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I would've said its pretty decent, if you wouldn't have said "fuck" in literally every single sentence.
30.06.16 11:36:52 pm
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Yates
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user SmD has written:
I would've said its pretty decent, if you wouldn't have said "fuck" in literally every single sentence.

Pretty much this.
01.07.16 12:31:50 am
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Jawohl
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@user Yates:
Ah~ Yates!
was waiting for you; dont you have your own trolly view to go on?

as for saying fuck in every sentence.... yeah thats very me
01.07.16 04:02:07 pm
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Black Wolf
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try playing new games
come 1n1 skype
01.07.16 05:49:52 pm
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Jawohl
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@user Black Wolf:

eh suppose i could; but then most of the new games are shit....
01.07.16 09:15:16 pm
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Masea
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@user Jawohl: For me, games that you play in videos are shit too.
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01.07.16 09:29:58 pm
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Jawohl
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hey thats fine; each to their own right?
i cant see us recording 'the latest call of duty' nor 'Atari's E.T.'

but that aside; what kind of games 'would' you rather fancy us covering?
02.07.16 02:38:34 am
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Zeik
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Just watched a few seconds and I see you've got the speech needed for this kind of videos. I'll probably watch it complete another day.
02.07.16 02:47:39 am
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Jawohl
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well thanks for the opening first impression
~i was under the assumption the opening was the most awkward.
but that would mostly be because im the one editing it; and hearing my own voice third person.... always odd.
02.07.16 01:24:34 pm
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Captione
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Would be better if you used different rants in the video, or maybe on all of it.
02.07.16 10:18:16 pm
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Jawohl
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@user Captione: different Rants?
03.07.16 01:08:06 am
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Captione
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Fuck? Try other words i mean.
Wanker, piece of shit, douche, or just add smth to your usual fuck phrase.

Hope i wont get temp banned for dis.
03.07.16 01:19:57 am
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Jawohl
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@user Captione:
il consider it, but no promises...
dont see what the big deal in my choice of curses are... but il think about it at least.
03.07.16 07:41:32 am
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what about, curseing in other languages, like Frence, Japanese or German.

That someone will understand it other not

Like:
Fu** = ficken(Ger), baise (Fr), Fakku(jap)

or a other word

Sh*t = scheiße (ger ß=Sharp "S") merde(Fr) Tawagoto(jap)

well only German words, 100% right, other laguages are with goggle translated.

Short: in one Video use the Word F**k in 2 or 3 other languages.

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03.07.16 07:56:03 am
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Jawohl
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Thanks guys for the critism so far;

But could you guys could please criticise the second part?
Promise this will be last time i spam a link here;
https://youtu.be/fHTeeB4Yl5Q
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